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I was told by Sugartits to do a essay for a unban.

Your Steam Name: Monkey Lover

Your ingame name: Monkey Lover

Your Steam Profile/SteamID: STEAM_0:1:105063254

Why were you banned?: Console Manipulation

Why should you be unbanned?: I didn't mean to do what I did and to prove that I was asked to write a essay

 

Who banned you? Console

Try Number 2: 

The Poodle Moth

The Venezuelan Poodle moth,  a. cribaria, is a species of moth that lives in Venezuela. This special moth filmed by Dr. Arthur Anker, who found this species in the Gran Sabana regional park of Venezuela.

This moth species seemingly appears to be closely allied to the Muslim Moth, or Diaphora mendica. The Poodle moth corresponds to the family Lasiocampidae, and it’s also plausible that it belongs to the genus Artace. It’s highly possible that it may be a subspecies of the Artace genus, whose species live Argentina up all the way north In North America, however facts point towards the possibility it may be a new species. There are between 10-15 South American species of the genus Artace that have been officially discovered so far. There can be three different reasons,it may range between the species of genus, it maybe a regional subspecies or even a completely new species all together.

Dr. Karl Shuker is a researcher who is interested in The Poodle moth. Dr. Karl used his knowledge in zoology, cryptozoology, and science writing to publish the Poodle Moth on his blog among with even more spectacular finds he so happens come across. Through his studies he found that the Poodle moth could be related to the Muslim moth.

Although it shares quite a few similarities, the location where they’re residing couldn’t be much different, the Muslim moth lives in Europe and Asia, while the Poodle moth lives North and South America. This leads scientist to believe it’s a new species.

 

 

 

 

 

 

Try Number 1:

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The Poodle Moth

The Venezuelan Poodle moth, or A. cribaria, is a kind of moth that lives in Venezuela. Said to be a hoax, this species was recently discovered/filmed in 2009 by Dr Arthur Anker of Bishkek, Kyrgyzstan, who found this species in the Gran Sabana region of Venezuela.

This species superficially appears to be closely related to the Muslim Moth, or Diaphora mendica. The Poodle moth belongs to the family Lasiocampidae, and likely belongs to the genus Artace. Even though it’s likely that it may be a subspecies of Artace cribraria, which ranges from North America all the way down to Argentina, it seems more likely that it may be a different species. There are between 10-15 South American species of Artace that have been officially discovered so far, so it may range between those, or possibly a regional subspecies or even a completely new species all together.

Another researcher, Dr. Karl Shuker, took an interest in the fuzzy white creature with bulging black eyes and strange brown antennae. He used his background in zoology, cryptozoology, and science writing to showcase the animal on his blog among other amazing finds. One of Shuker's colleagues speculated that the Venezuelan poodle moth bears some small resemblance to Diaphora mendica, the muslin moth of the leptidopteran family Arctiidae. 

Although it does have some of the same fuzzy parts, its antennae, coloring, and front legs are much different. In addition, the muslin moth is common to the U.K. and Russian Palearctic- they would never be as far south as Venezuela. It could be that the muslin moth and the Venezuelan poodle moth are related, especially with only 6,000 of the estimated 11,000 in the Arctiidae family. Shuker thinks a new species may have been discovered.

 

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Boyo you're given a chance to get yourself unbanned by writing an essay, and just like the reason youre banned, You can't even do that without cheating. You are literally a lost cause, dont come back here because you will never deserve to be unbaneed.

 

-1 for unban

 

+1 for irrevocable permanent ban from ALL platforms pertaining to titsrp with no possibility of appeal.

 

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And just to prove, this essay is over 80% plagiarized from other media, here is an image from a reputable plagiarism checker

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Boyo you're given a chance to get yourself unbanned by writing an essay, and just like the reason youre banned, You can't even do that without cheating. You are literally a lost cause, dont come back here because you will never deserve to be unbaneed.

 

-1 for unban

 

+1 for irrevocable permanent ban from ALL platforms pertaining to titsrp with no possibility of appeal.

 

A bit difficult writing on something that has very minuscule information available.

Edit: I'll edit it and post the plagiarism results

Boyo you're given a chance to get yourself unbanned by writing an essay, and just like the reason youre banned, You can't even do that without cheating. You are literally a lost cause, dont come back here because you will never deserve to be unbaneed.

 

-1 for unban

 

+1 for irrevocable permanent ban from ALL platforms pertaining to titsrp with no possibility of appeal.

 

A bit difficult writing on something that has very minuscule information available.

Why write an essay on something you don't have information or proper research about. Essay writing is taught in like sixth grade. This essay makes me want you to stay banned even more.

Boyo you're given a chance to get yourself unbanned by writing an essay, and just like the reason youre banned, You can't even do that without cheating. You are literally a lost cause, dont come back here because you will never deserve to be unbaneed.

 

-1 for unban

 

+1 for irrevocable permanent ban from ALL platforms pertaining to titsrp with no possibility of appeal.

 

A bit difficult writing on something that has very minuscule information available.

Why write an essay on something you don't have information or proper research about. Essay writing is taught in like sixth grade. This essay makes me want you to stay banned even more.

It was a topic that sugar had to pick.

Boyo you're given a chance to get yourself unbanned by writing an essay, and just like the reason youre banned, You can't even do that without cheating. You are literally a lost cause, dont come back here because you will never deserve to be unbaneed.

 

-1 for unban

 

+1 for irrevocable permanent ban from ALL platforms pertaining to titsrp with no possibility of appeal.

 

A bit difficult writing on something that has very minuscule information available.

Why write an essay on something you don't have information or proper research about. Essay writing is taught in like sixth grade. This essay makes me want you to stay banned even more.

It was a topic that sugar had to pick.

 

So the owner of the server gives you a topic and you plagiarize 90% of the essay on it. You still wouldn't pass sixth grade because your teacher wouldn't be an idiot and we aren't idiots either.

No use in editing it, I've saved a copy of the original essay along with the plagiarism results, you will not be unbanned

 

 

Monoxide

Boyo you're given a chance to get yourself unbanned by writing an essay, and just like the reason youre banned, You can't even do that without cheating. You are literally a lost cause, dont come back here because you will never deserve to be unbaneed.

 

 

 

Reply to first quote) I see where you're coming from, however i'm offering to redo it, I understand I made a mistake plagiarizing but there was very limited information, I realize that I did plagiarize but there's a only about 3 sites that actually gives information. 

 

Reply to second quote) Alright this really Russel my feathers, first of all how about you read my other ban appeal that's before this one, you'll see how i'm trying to express it was a unintentional and that I meant no harm. Second, "you can't even do that without cheating" so now you're flaming when I'm seriously trying to get unbanned? That sure is mature. That's why i'm redoing it, not because I don't care, but because i'm seriously remorseful about it. Third, "You are literally a lost cause, dont come back here because you will never deserve to be unbaneed". You're just flaming even more, seriously man, what did I do to deserve these hurtful words? Yes, I did hack, but it was with no ill-intent, i'm doing this because I realized the mistake I made and i'm trying to fix it and you're just putting me down. You're being close-minded and also a bully.

 

 

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Sammahblammah

So the fucking owner of the server gives you a topic and you plagiarize 90% of the essay on it. You still wouldn't pass sixth grade because your teacher wouldn't be an idiot and we aren't idiots either.

 

 

Again with even more put downs, criticism is one thing but you're just being hurtful. Wtf guys.

Yes, I did hack, but it was with no ill-intent,

:haHAA:

 

That's not a thing.

 

I wasn't going to respond until I learned you plagiarized the thing you were supposed to write. It shows you put a minimal amount of effort into your appeal even though you so desperately want to get unbanned, and those two things usually do not go hand in hand. I literally found around 6 articles you could take information from, and at least not just copy and paste the text from the thing into your essay. You can get information from websites, that's not even the bad part, it's that you literally just pasted it down and said "hmm, good work, I am unban now." 

If you want to get unbanned and actually play on the server show us that you care enough to even just put effort into a forums post. 

I see these hacking ban appeals all the time, and 99-100% of them get denied. You know why? Because you hacked. If you are sorry, show us you are sorry. If you care, show us you care. You haven't shown us that with your essay because you took it all from other people.

 

 

 

Edit: doing my own plagiarism test both of these paragraphs are literally copy/pasted from 1 website

Another researcher, Dr. Karl Shuker, took an interest in the fuzzy white creature with bulging black eyes and strange brown antennae. He used his background in zoology, cryptozoology, and science writing to showcase the animal on his blog among other amazing finds. One of Shuker's colleagues speculated that the Venezuelan poodle moth bears some small resemblance to Diaphora mendica, the muslin moth of the leptidopteran family Arctiidae.

Although it does have some of the same fuzzy parts, its antennae, coloring, and front legs are much different. In addition, the muslin moth is common to the U.K. and Russian Palearctic- they would never be as far south as Venezuela. It could be that the muslin moth and the Venezuelan poodle moth are related, especially with only 6,000 of the estimated 11,000 in the Arctiidae family. Shuker thinks a new species may have been discovered.

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